He was pissing in excitement after he discovered the Coke machine, that fucker really wanted a Coke! Then to his dismay his coke came out covered in shit! HAHAHAHAHAA
He was pissing in excitement after he discovered the Coke machine, that fucker really wanted a Coke! Then to his dismay his coke came out covered in shit! HAHAHAHAHAA
Hahahaha YOU GOT IT, BRUTHA!
Who dat mutha fukka?
NOT YOU MOTHERFUCKER
What the fuck!?
The screen cut to black at the best part!
it's like in the movies when the hot girl starts to undress. just like in the movies...
Very wrong..
But somewhat hilarious at the same time. :3
I gave you one star.
For actually showing me that you may have potential, I mean there are some idiots I sit down with that aren't even capable of learning how to do a simple tween.. Otherwise, your timing is shit, that's what mostly bothered me. You could work on everything, start with your art.
k, thx for the pointers.
hmm
You might want to consider making these little how to's/tutorials a bit more visually appealing when you make them in the future. Also it would probably be a good idea to make all frames progress manually instead of automatically, as some of the frames move forward too quickly.
yes, i tryed to make all of the frames long enough for people to read them, and i had issues when coding the buttons.
Even if this where something..
You need to slow down the animation a little bit, it's also extremely choppy.
A tip : Draw your own characters, and learn how to use FLASH.
Basically, you need to learn a lot (nearly everything) if you ever want to be even half serious about making a real flash movie.
I made it with liveswif give me a break man
For your first time..
This is a really great first animation, it was very different from what we usually get here from first time authors such as yourself. The graphics were great, everything was well animated and planed out, and it even told a story. I look forward to seeing your future submissions here on Newgrounds!
Great work.
Thanks alot ! Means alot to get good feedback. I'm sure my next submissions will be better as I use less tweening and more onion skinning.
Im in awe!
Never before has one expressed his true inner feelings towards women so clearly, bravo! Beat them hoes on the head with crow bars, that'll get them to shut the fuck up!
Age 36, Male
Writer/Student
Joined on 12/15/99